Day 6 and Counting

DEFIANT

PANEL 1 The interior of a space ship that is equal parts Jack Kirby and HR Giger (lots of abstract shapes and polka dot clouds of energy but with disturbingly organic textures as if the Xenomorphs infested Marvel's Asgard). Doors in the walls with bars and numbers on them should suggest a prison or ship's brig. Defiant stands with her back to the wall, ready with a gun that looks like something straight out of Alex Raymond's Flash Gordon. She's hiding around the corner from a prowling trio of goons. They are dressed from head to toe in red and black checkered environmental suits with helmets that look like World War I era gas masks. Defiant is a gorgeous blonde that looks like she stepped out of a Frazetta painting. She's got blue skin and some very intricate abstract tattoo work down the left side of her body. Her costume leaves very little to the imagination.

PANEL 2 Defiant rounds the corner giving the reader a very good view of her shapely posterior and vaporizes goons with a wild spray of laser fire.

SFX ZAP, ZZAP, ZZAPP

PANEL 3 Cut to the inside of cell. Princess Arda, leader of the Resistance, is chained to the wall. She looks up as the door whisks open to reveal Arda.

ARDA Defiant!

DEFIANT I'm here to rescue you princess.

DIALOG(OP) Kevin?

PANEL 4 Close-up of Arda and Defiant. Their bodies are tantalizingly close to each other. Arda is leaning towards Defiant, eyes closed. It should look like she's about to kiss Defiant. Defiant has turned toward the reader her face...well defiant.

DEFIANT Not now dammit!

ARDA My hero...

PANEL 5 Cut to a modern suburban bedroom. The walls are covered with video game and heavy metal posters(one of which features a very large, angry looking tiger). Kevin, Defiant's alter ego, sits in front of a computer with his head turned towards the right of the panel. Kevin, by the way, is a spiky haired blonde fourteen year old boy, with peach fuzz facial hair, an earring and lots of zits. He has the same annoyed look on his face worn by Defiant in the previous panel.

HIS MOM(OP) I thought I told you to take out the garbage!

KEVIN But garbage day isn't until tomorrow!

MOM (OP) NOW!